UriahTWolfe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Cash 1200]

Cool!

Great work! I especially liked the effect with the explosion on the "planet's" surface as the ship sped away.

grabbelfant responds:

i liked that part too

[Birthday Massacre]

Everybody dies...

...except maybe for the guy who's killing them all. Cute! :-)

Rapheus responds:

The ending I had in mind was slightly different, I was going to get to the end of that huge line, then blow my head off. This is slightly more pleasant.

[Ghost- Origins]

Too bad you won't finish it.

I really rather liked it. Just one critique on a technical aspect - it looks like you might have used tweening for the head-turns - i.e., it looks like you drew the head facing left, the head facing forward and the head facing right, and used tweening to transition from these three positions. While it's still a great little flash, those particular scenes were a bit awkward as the head shapes morphed and distorted between phases. If that's something you would want to fix, you really wouldn't need to draw every single frame, just two more frames for a quarter-turn left and quarter-turn right. Tweening between 5 frames instead of 3 would go much more smoothly.

Just a suggestion. As you say this is old, you may well have already improved beyond that, which if so, then never mind the advice and good job! :-)

Ran2Chaos responds:

Yes You are correct. I just made the whole face turn but when I did the original animation I had the courtesy of adjusting the scar to at least fake that I put more effort into it. Nice catch. I understand it looks blocky like that and I have learned to adjust it for any future animations for a more smoother look. Thanks for the score. It helps give me confidence to try animating again.

[Fire Fighter Benjamin]

Tyewt.

That's just tyewt. Too tyewt. What more need be said? "Dawwww...." - (Another reviewer, 8/6/2010)

RicePirate responds:

lollers :P

[runedog38's gun tut]

Need to stop audio on one page when switching

Looks okay, but you need to make sure the audio stops on one page when the user clicks to the next - I went through it quick & it was a chorus of you by the time I reached the end. ;-)

runedog83 responds:

sorry whenever i tried making the code i got syntax errors and then i tried stop all sounds and that literally stopped sounds for the rest of the video i will take a look into it thx for the report

[Dreams of a Sapling]

5/5, 10/10 but...

I am surely impressed with how you managed to fit all that into about a half MB. Great work! :-)

Elf7722 responds:

Thank you! I am as impressed as you are, I thought the music alone would be 2-3 megs

[Colossal Fighting]

Short...

...but sweet. Guess that's why they call 'em flash "shorts". Nice work! :-)

BurningIceShard responds:

Thanks

[Dual Arms Verbatim Part 1]

Definitely a winner.

Very well done on all fronts, from what I could see. Thanks, and keep 'em coming! :-)

RPGsrok responds:

Glad you liked it! I'll do what I can. Thanks for reviewing!