Short but sweet
Somewhat stylish, quite sweet but WAY too short. ;-) (That's a good thing to be told, btw - it means people want more!) :-)
Short but sweet
Somewhat stylish, quite sweet but WAY too short. ;-) (That's a good thing to be told, btw - it means people want more!) :-)
LOL! :-)
I thought it was going to be about the old "Laughter is the best medicine" blurb, but I liked your angle better. And you know what? I -know- the feeling - sometimes proving someone wrong becomes a mission worth risking life & limb for! ;-D
Front-paged?
I clicked this because it was front-paged, ostensibly "by popular demand". I'm a bit curious about who all demanded it. :-? Not that it matters, I guess. I think you did put some effort into this, so for that you certainly deserve credit. The animation is okay, I've seen much, much worse animation & art than this in stories that I liked, so while there's always room for improvement there no matter who you are (self included, NO doubt), the only thing I'd suggest focusing on a bit more is making a coherent story line. You did okay, don't get me wrong, but storyline skills don't come overnight. You have an imagination and are putting it to work, and that's good - just put it to work a little more if you can. ;-) Keep on trucking! :-)
Very well put-together!
This was clearly a serious effort on your part, you threw in a lot of little touches that you might not have had to and that shows that you care about making it good. I just have one question - was that a unibrow on the woman? ;-) Not sure, it might just have been an accent mark and she still looked fitting for the mood either way. Just curious. Looking forward to more! :-)
Too funny
Way too funny, I liked it! This would be easily a good series. :-)
haha, a series? Of what exactly?
Funny!
Very funny! One critique - these appear to have been made in a series, but they're not numbered & so you can't tell what order they happen in. I know, not 'vital' or anything, but some things apparently happened before others in the series as a whole, and it'd be kinda' nice to be able to watch them in that order. Otherwise, terrific series! :-)
Nice hook
Nice hook, I like the style & the piece of storyline you chose for this. I only have one criticism, and it's a very, very minor thing - when he was drinking, I assume that was supposed to be a bottle of beer, but it was a bit on the slight side. It looked more like he was chugging cough syrup. Again it's no big deal, just something I thought I'd mention. Disregard it if you wish, I'll not be offended. :-)
Getting better! :-)
Sweet! :-) The little thing at the end as Reiko looked on (which I shall refrain from identifying d/t spoilerage) was a cute touch. Very "Pet Semetary-ish", if you recall the little boy's death early in the movie.
I saw Pet Sematary once many years ago but I can't remember anything except that Herman Munster was in it. Oh well. Glad you enjoyed the cartoon!
Most excellent! :-)
Even though I knew right away what the ropes actually were, that didn't ruin the humor of it in any way, shape or form. Nice series! :-) It would be very interesting to have a "Reiko versus KidsRSkary" collab - love to see two creepy little girls like that duke it out to the death. ;-D
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