UriahTWolfe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ghost- Origins]

Too bad you won't finish it.

I really rather liked it. Just one critique on a technical aspect - it looks like you might have used tweening for the head-turns - i.e., it looks like you drew the head facing left, the head facing forward and the head facing right, and used tweening to transition from these three positions. While it's still a great little flash, those particular scenes were a bit awkward as the head shapes morphed and distorted between phases. If that's something you would want to fix, you really wouldn't need to draw every single frame, just two more frames for a quarter-turn left and quarter-turn right. Tweening between 5 frames instead of 3 would go much more smoothly.

Just a suggestion. As you say this is old, you may well have already improved beyond that, which if so, then never mind the advice and good job! :-)

Ran2Chaos responds:

Yes You are correct. I just made the whole face turn but when I did the original animation I had the courtesy of adjusting the scar to at least fake that I put more effort into it. Nice catch. I understand it looks blocky like that and I have learned to adjust it for any future animations for a more smoother look. Thanks for the score. It helps give me confidence to try animating again.

[Teksi - Part One]

Not rough at all.

That doesn't look rough at all to me - it looks spit & polished quite nicely. The motion is fluid & natural, the effects & arrangement are good - hope to see more soon! :-)

[Scare - with extra cheese]

Cute. :-)

That sure is one fast critter! I'd say your experiment was a success. :-)

[Bear Bear]

I sorta' didn't see that coming...

...sorta'. Not sure why, but in a way, I did half expect it - but it's not really quite an expectable ending. I like it - would go great alongside one of those "Kids R Scary" toons. Creepy. :-)

[Paging Dr. Seuss]

Quite good!

"Doctor Seuss" meets "Hannibal Lecter" - very creative! :-)

[Fire Fighter Benjamin]

Tyewt.

That's just tyewt. Too tyewt. What more need be said? "Dawwww...." - (Another reviewer, 8/6/2010)

RicePirate responds:

lollers :P

[We Are Science Probes]

Good, but is anybody really listening?

Already I see people misinterpretting it. "To say religious people hate science because..." yadda yadda yadda - that person didn't get word one of the message, here. It's not about all religious people, only certain radical fundamentalist strains. Belief in "a higher power" does not equate to "anti-science", unless your belief instructs you to ignore logic and/or common, everyday observatiobns. It's not an anti-religious message, it's an anti-radicalism message - what will happen if we let radical views trump reality.

[runedog38's gun tut]

Need to stop audio on one page when switching

Looks okay, but you need to make sure the audio stops on one page when the user clicks to the next - I went through it quick & it was a chorus of you by the time I reached the end. ;-)

runedog83 responds:

sorry whenever i tried making the code i got syntax errors and then i tried stop all sounds and that literally stopped sounds for the rest of the video i will take a look into it thx for the report