Cool idea!
This isn't the kind of idea one sees all over the place already - rather hard to find something these days that's not already overdone, but you did it. I like the style of this! Look forward to more! :-)
Cool idea!
This isn't the kind of idea one sees all over the place already - rather hard to find something these days that's not already overdone, but you did it. I like the style of this! Look forward to more! :-)
Not bad, but...
...it's so friggin' slow as to be almost obnoxious. At least the first part. Don't get me wrong - it's a good toon, the technical skill is quite good. It's easy to go overboard when trying to make something tragic & melodramatic. You did on this one, though just a little, not too terribly much.To make the pace more tolerable, thore should be more going on in the animation for the viewer to focus on. Even just leaves blowing in the wind or sounds in the background of things incidental in the environment of the story.
Still, overall, great job! :-) Looking forward to more. :-)
Thanks, good review, I agree with you. =)
More will be coming soon.
Tone down some maybe?
Great work, it must have taken awhile to put this together. You really have your eye on the details. My only suggestion would be to tone down the tension of the voice acting just a bit - melodrama is a given in anime, but it can be overdone. It's not overdone here by much, though, but it is a bit and that's just my opinion, ymmv. :-)
Still, nice work just the same! :-)
How very random.
Random much! :-)
yeah, random... ;)
Link's evil twin sister?
Looks like it has potential. Good drawing style, look forward to the first ep! :-)
There's something to be said...
...about honesty.
I'm not sure it's all good. But it's -something- to be said, at least, which is I suppose better than nothing at all. ;-)
Cool!
Great work! I especially liked the effect with the explosion on the "planet's" surface as the ship sped away.
i liked that part too
First time I've seen this concept
I see it's been done before, but this is the first I recall seeing this concept. It's a great idea, really brings out the creativity in peeps. More! More! :-)
Need help with translation
Great flash, but your English translation is very, very bad. I recommend either getting help with the translation, or just don't bother translating it at all and describe a summary of your story in English in the comments section instead. The bad translation line-by-line-by-line is more distracting. Great work, though!
Everybody dies...
...except maybe for the guy who's killing them all. Cute! :-)
The ending I had in mind was slightly different, I was going to get to the end of that huge line, then blow my head off. This is slightly more pleasant.
Beauty is where you see it.
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