Liked it all but the ending was too abrupt
I liked it all, except the end was too abrupt. It wasn't what happened, just that one moment there was action and music, and the next nothing. That's okay to end a fast-paced short with, but something that was flowing so slowly and leisurely should end with more of a "fade out" than a sudden stop. It's good enough as is, of course, that's just my honest thought on one part of it.