Excellent still-art
Good flick, I loved the still-shots the best. Excellent gradients and color palletes, and some pretty cool animation details here & there, too. Keep 'em coming! :-)
Excellent still-art
Good flick, I loved the still-shots the best. Excellent gradients and color palletes, and some pretty cool animation details here & there, too. Keep 'em coming! :-)
There are SO many other directions this clda' gone
...but I'm glad it didn't. ;-) This actually had more of a coherent plot to it than the movie did. Thanks! :-)
Short, but sweet.
The sound didn't start for a few seconds until after the action did - I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I liked it anyway.
I definitely recommend you keep at it.
Interesting idea, not bad story-telling. I have two suggestions: practice drawing as much as you can, it can only help you improve, and 2: If you can, try to improve the sound quality. I'm not sure where the blurriness of some of the sound is coming from, but it's probably a result of being too close to the microphone.
In any case, I like it. Hope to see more soon. :-)
Delicious!
One of the most lush, vibrant flashes I've ever had the pleasure of watching. I remembered it from several years back, I recognized it right away - that's quite an impression! :-)
OMFG...
Excellent! I must say, the "I love you, daddy" scene was a bit... uurrrmmm... "disturbing", but still, a great family flick if ever a great family flick I did see. Keep 'em coming! :-)
haha yeah. thanks!
I'd definitely encourage you to keep at it!
You chose good music and kept the animation well-synced with it. The story was good, and the point of the story also good. You did a lot of subtle things very well when it came to having multiple things happening all at once - things that take thought & attention to detail. I think you could probably do better if you did a little less of that kind of detail and focused more on the smaller details that all go on at once - changing facial expressions on different characters in different ways, birds passing by in the background, a piece of cloth blowing in the wind while the character stands there. You clearly have the mind to think about such things, so you probably can do all of what you did in this plus what I'm suggesting. But the finer details are where you'll get the most reward and recognition.
It was great as is, of course - just trying to offer constructive criticism for one direction you might or might not choose to go. Keep 'em coming just the same! :-)
I liked it very much as-is...
For my own tastes, the profanity and violence weren't nearly overdone. :-) Great work! Love to see more! :-)
5/5 10/10 - unquestionably one of the most...
...gorgeous flashes I've seen in a LONG time. Great eye candy, and a nice beat to go with it.
Beauty is where you see it.
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Knoxicana
Pittsburgh, PA
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