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Liked it all but the ending was too abrupt

I liked it all, except the end was too abrupt. It wasn't what happened, just that one moment there was action and music, and the next nothing. That's okay to end a fast-paced short with, but something that was flowing so slowly and leisurely should end with more of a "fade out" than a sudden stop. It's good enough as is, of course, that's just my honest thought on one part of it.

ThatRoomThere responds:

k, thanks for liking most of it.

im going to change the ending though and resubmit it

Are subliminal messages considered 'abuse'? ;-)

I voted 5, and not just 'cuz of the subliminal. ;-) That was cool. Totally random and a real pleasure to watch.

I could watch more of this

That was rather interesting, kind of mesmerizing in a strange way. Like the person before said, it would be better to make the motion a bit more smooth. It was sufficient as is, but could be really cool if you polished it up a bit. I liked the effect with the magnifying glass. Keep 'em coming! :-)

Definitely could use some better drawing

For the record, I've seen the movie many times. The drawing could use some tweaking as I wouldn't have recognized any of the characters if I didn't already know they were supposed to be from "Donnie Darko", not even the rabbit. As for your attempt to be humorous, about the only funny part was Donnie shooting the rabbit with a dart gun. That was worth a chuckle, but it was the only thing. The rest of the animation consisted of characters drifting by the screen - they can't really be funny 'cuz they're not "doing" anything. Having Margaret Xiao (or whatever her name is) telling someone to "chut up" who's lying there bleeding to death and pleading for help - that would be kinda' funny. Or having one of those "time worms" pop out of Donnie Darko's pants when a pretty girl walks by - that would be funny, too. But they have to do something, just drifting by in stillness isn't funny.

I -DEFINITELY- want to see more.

This was too cute. Might like it more with better graphics, but even without, it's worth watching. :-)

OMFG!

LOL! I was about to blast you for the credits being too long. I'm sure glad I didn't. ;-) I'm also just as sure that some people aren't going to see the humor in it, but man, -I- thought it was a hoot! :-)

Good enough that I wish it were longer

I know it can be a pain to make long animations sometimes, but this was good enough that I really could've enjoyed seeing it for another minute or two. Good work! :-)

absentm1nd responds:

heehee, thankyou

Liked 1 & 3

I liked the first and the third movie. The second one didn't make any sense even in a nonsense sort of way, but overall because of 1 & 3, I liked it. Especially 3. Thanks! :-)

Well, it was enough to get me interested

Enough to get me interested. Please do finish it, it seems like it could be good. No problem with the technical skills that I can see, so show us what you can do with the story. :-)

Touching

It doesn't matter that you didn't think it was the best drawing in the world, it matters that it meant something. Very touching. Thanks for sharing it. :-)

Beauty is where you see it.

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