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Definitely very well-animated...

...my only requests might be a soundtrack (something subtle & almost hard to hear would be fine if you don't want to draw attention away from the animation) and perhaps a splash or two of color. But still, it's probably a heck of a lot better than I can do (and orders of magnitude better than the one I -did- submit years ago) and I liked it pretty well as-is. Keep it up! :-)

Excellent!

Loved it! To be honest, I think you should hype up the "Time Warp" music video angle a bit more - even for those who know nothing of the "Left 4..." references (such as, admittedly, myself), the RHPS reference would be sure to attract quite a few views. Good luck on YouTube! :-)

Decent amount of technical skill, but...

...I really couldn't follow what was happening or why. The animation & appearance were acceptable (though for even the best, there's always room for improvement), but the sound was hard to understand. That might just be my ears, though - I don't have the best hearing in the world. So maybe others heard it fine, and perhaps if I heard it better too I'd got more out of it. So if it's just me with that particular issue, then never mind, and in either case, keep 'em coming! :-)

Nice effort, decent (but sad) story

You can use a little practice drawing, but you made the scenes just right for conveying the story you were trying to tell and it was a decent enough story. So 4/5, 7/10 - keep it up! :-)

A bit on the simplistic side...

...but passable. You've definitely got good skill at facial expressiveness. Keep 'em coming!

Senseleess, random muppet carnage...

...the breakfast of champions! :-) Seriously - how many ways can Elmo die? Ya' know, that makes _excellent_ fodder for toonage. Nice job! :-)

mecagir responds:

thanks! im really glad you like it and if I had to guess how many ways i could kill elmo I'd say..... 90000000. but i doubt i'll get to make that many episodes! haha

Accurate enough, I s'pose.

It's good for a homework assignment, but I'm not quite sure it's such a great fit here. Still, good work for what it was, so I certainly can't blam the thing. Be even better with sound. :-)

Lol!

"Yeah, he still got it!" (snap-fizzle-crackle-THUD!)

Very cute. Do a Kojak one! Or better still, Remington Steel! :-) Anyway, great work! Very funny. :-)

Trippy, indeed.!

I like! Your animation style would go very well with some of the Beetles' tunes. Very "Yellow Submarine"-ish. :-)

Not bad.

I think you did a fairly good job. I liked it. If you'd like constructive suggestions, I'd say for better comedic effect, add more quick, almost-too-fast-to-hear sound effects. Like "sproing!" or "BUZZ!" or "ding-ding!" - tiny things like that at just the right moment to highlight a character's expression or the ridiculousness of the situation can really add to the humor. Also quick scenes here and there - like a very fast, almost-too-fast-to-see shot where you back up from the scene & show the preadtor right behind the guy, wearing a tutu. Not too much, of course - that would be too corny. But it would elevate the humor just a bit. Even so, I liked it fine as-is, so these aren't critiques, just ideas on how to get more of the mood I think you were shooting for. :-)

PrivateJoker152 responds:

You are totally right, this animation is boring without these elements, I didn't see what is missing there, but when you wrote this it is so obvious, in my next animations I will use these things, definitely the sounds. Really thank you!

Beauty is where you see it.

Uriah Wolfe @UriahTWolfe

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